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Half-Life 2

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  1. citro

    citro CRYING LIGHTNING

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    so I've been delaying submitting this for review for a while now for no reason really. Pyre has the credit for thinking up the basis of this theme, but I coded it and expanded it quite a bit after the original idea. If any of you have played Half-Life 2 you'll know what the story's about. Pretty much, it's the village (the rebellion) vs. the Combine invaders and Xen aliens.

    While making this I wanted to stray away from the general 'Link / Inspector / Mike / etc here, PRs PM, BG on me,' layout which is common in quite a lot of themes currently on the server. In setups with rogue distracters, absent bodyguards, daykillers and votekillers you can stop PRs claiming and putting the village into autopilot. There are powerful PRs, e.g. Gordon Freeman, an unrevealing samurai, but he will find it tricky to connect and can't claim for fear of the Hunter or President Breen sniping him.

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    {
    "name": "HL2",
    "author": [
    "Pyre",
    "citro"
    ],
    "summary": "It's the rebellion pitted against the abusive Combine and invading Xen monsters in this action-packed mafia theme! Win your freedom, or become a race enslaved by aliens! PM any comments/questions to Pyre or citro.",
    "sides": [
    {
    "side": "village",
    "translation": "Rebels",
    "winmsg": "The rebels, led by ~Players~, have successfully liberated Earth and restored peace!"
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia1",
    "translation": "Combine",
    "winmsg": "The oppressive Combine forces have enslaved the humans... now ~Players~ control the Earth."
    },
    {
    "side": "mafia2",
    "translation": "Xen",
    "winmsg": "The swarm of alien creatures from Xen have overcome all resistance. A victory for ~Players~!"
    }
    ],
    "roles": [
    {
    "role": "villager",
    "translation": "Civilian",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a helpless soul in a helpless situation, living under oppressive Combine rule. Your last hope is a tale of Gordon Freeman, a rebel who could potentially end this conflict. Attempt to join the resistance with /rebel [your name] every night!",
    "info": "Votes during the day. Can attempt to become a rebel once per night (25% chance). Wins with Rebellion. Sided with the Bystanders.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "rebel": {
    "command": "convert",
    "target": "OnlySelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1,
    "newRole": "rebel",
    "silent": true,
    "failChance": 0.7
    }
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "rebel",
    "translation": "Rebel",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a rebel, although the Combine barely fear you alone. Your job is to assist Gordon Freeman in destroying the alien presence on Earth. You get hax on night actions and can sometimes discover power roles, Combine and Resistance alike!",
    "info": "Votes during the day. Gets hax on kill and power roles. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.09,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    },
    "distract": {
    "revealTeam": 0.09,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    },
    "inspect": {
    "revealTeam": 0.09,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    },
    "protect": {
    "revealTeam": 0.09,
    "revealPlayer": 0.04
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hooker",
    "translation": "Alyx",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are Alyx, a woman who has teamed up with Gordon Freeman to defeat the Combine once and for all! You can stop a player performing their action every night with /distract.",
    "info": "Can distract once per night. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2,
    "distractmsg": "You spent the night fending off Alyx, and were too distracted to do anything.",
    "teammsg": "Alyx visited your partner last night and you were too busy to act!"
    }
    },
    "startup": {
    "revealRole": "bodyguard"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hooker2",
    "translation": "Alyx",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are Alyx, a woman who has teamed up with Gordon Freeman to defeat the Combine once and for all! You can stop a player performing their action every night with /distract. The death of your father has angered you and you can now /kill once per night!",
    "info": "Can distract and kill once per night. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 2,
    "distractmsg": "You spent the night fending off Alyx, and were too distracted to do anything.",
    "teammsg": "Alyx visited your partner last night and you were too busy to act!"
    },
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 6
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "inspector",
    "translation": "Kleiner",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are a scientist, sided with the rebellion, and a good friend of Gordon Freeman. You have an analytical mind and take careful consideration of everything; use /inspect at night to find out a player's role.",
    "info": "An inspector. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 30
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bodyguard",
    "translation": "D0g",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You are Alyx's robotic companion! Your immense strength lets you defend people at night - use /protect to keep your friends, Gordon and Alyx, safe. You can also use /smash (once!), crushing someone with a nearby object, but you can only use one of your actions per night.",
    "info": "A bodyguard with a one-time kill. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "protect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 5,
    "broadcast": "role",
    "restrict": [
    "smash"
    ]
    },
    "smash": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 10,
    "broadcast": "role",
    "charges": 1,
    "restrict": [
    "protect"
    ]
    }
    },
    "startup": {
    "revealRole": "hooker"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "samurai",
    "translation": "Gordon",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You're Gordon Freeman, the the leader of the rebellion. The only hope to effectively stop the Combine, you're an important person to keep alive! You can use /kill during the standby phase (you won't be revealed). Your HEV suit protects you from poison, and you have two votes because of your influence.",
    "info": "Can daykill (won't reveal). +2 vote. Can't be poisoned. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "msg": "You can kill now by typing /kill [name] (you won't be revealed!)",
    "killmsg": "Gordon Freeman draws his gun and fires two shots! ~Target~ stood no chance."
    }
    },
    "poison": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    },
    "vote": 2
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "spy",
    "translation": "Barney",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "An undercover spy for the rebels, dressed as a Combine. You can sometimes gain information about Combine power roles, and you appear as a Civil Protection to anyone who inspects you.",
    "info": "A spy who reveals as Civil Protection. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.12,
    "revealPlayer": 0.06
    }
    },
    "inspect": {
    "revealAs": "mafia1a"
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "eli",
    "translation": "Eli",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You're Eli Vance, a scientist and Alyx's father. Anybody who daykills you will be revealed! When you die, Alyx becomes angry and gains the ability to kill.",
    "info": "Exposes daykillers, and powers up Alyx on death. Sided with the Rebellion",
    "actions": {
    "daykill": "revealkiller",
    "daykillrevengemsg": "As Eli drops to the floor, he reveals ~Target~ as the ~Role~!",
    "onDeath": {
    "convertRoles": {
    "hooker": "hooker2"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mossman",
    "translation": "Mossman",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You're Judith Mossman. Having previously sided with the Combine, you reveal as the traitorous President Breen. People don't trust you, so your vote counts as -2.",
    "info": "Inspects as Breen. Vote of -2. Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "inspect": {
    "revealAs": "mayor"
    },
    "vote": -2
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "uriah",
    "translation": "Uriah",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You're a Vortigaunt Scientist, Uriah! Your extensive grasp of science and magic allows you to /safeguard one player during the night, keeping them from harm's way.",
    "info": "Can safeguard once per night. Sided with the Resistance.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "safeguard": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 5
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "gman",
    "translation": "G-Man",
    "side": "village",
    "help": "You're the shady Government Man, and you answer only to your employers. You're pulling the strings behind this whole thing; you can use /inspect, /protect, and /distract once each per game.",
    "info": "Can inspect, distract or protect once per night (one charge each). Sided with the Rebellion.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "inspect": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 16,
    "restrict": [
    "protect",
    "distract"
    ],
    "charges": 1
    },
    "protect": {
    "target": "Any",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 4,
    "restrict": [
    "inspect",
    "distract"
    ],
    "charges": 1
    },
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 1,
    "restrict": [
    "inspect",
    "protect"
    ],
    "charges": 1
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafia1a",
    "translation": "Civil Protection",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are a member of the Civil Protection, an abusive form of police. You can kill once per night with /kill, but it's shared with your companions!",
    "info": "Can kill once per night (shared with other Civil Protection). Sided with Combine.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButRole",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 15,
    "broadcast": "role",
    "msg": "You were disposed of by the Combine forces!"
    }
    },
    "startup": "role-reveal"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mafia1b",
    "translation": "Overwatch",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "You are an even more brutal soldier of the Combine, specifically engineered to defeat the rebel forces. You can /kill once per night (not shared), can't be distracted, and have a +1.5 vote. You know the other Overwatch and Civil Protection.",
    "info": "Can kill once per night (not shared), and poison once every three nights (shared). Knows other overwatch. Sided with Combine.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButRole",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 10,
    "broadcast": "role",
    "msg": "You were disposed of by the Combine forces!"
    }
    },
    "distract": {
    "mode": "ignore"
    },
    "vote": 1.5,
    "startup": {
    "revealRole": [
    "mafia1b",
    "mafia1a"
    ]
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "bomb",
    "translation": "Manhack",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "A flying mechanical creature with blades flying around you at all times, you possess no actual commands, but anyone who comes near you at night will die in two days from bloodloss. Furthermore, any daykillers unfortunate enough to target you will die.",
    "info": "Poisons on contact and revenges daykills. Sided with Combine.",
    "actions": {
    "kill": {
    "mode": "poisonattacker",
    "count": 2,
    "poisonDeadMessage": "The wounds you sustained from the Manhack's blades finally took their toll..."
    },
    "daykill": "bomb"
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "mayor",
    "translation": "Breen",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "The dictator that has negotiated with the Combine forces and handed over Earth, you now have control over the civil protection and overwatch. You can lynch anyone with one vote! Use this ability to get rid of Gordon Freeman once and for all, the one threat in your plans.",
    "info": "Vote of +1000. Sided with Combine.",
    "actions": {
    "vote": 1000
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "hunter",
    "translation": "Hunter",
    "side": "mafia1",
    "help": "An alien with a passion to kill, you can use /kill once every day phase. You also have another one-time daykill, /stab - however, this will reveal you. You often spy on the enemy, so you can use /stalk at night to find out who a player visited.",
    "info": "Can daykill twice (the second reveals) and stalk once per night. Sided with Combine.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "stalk": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "common": "Self",
    "priority": 25
    }
    },
    "standby": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "killmsg": "~Target~ was impaled by explosive bullets coming from a distant Hunter!"
    },
    "stab": {
    "command": "kill",
    "target": "AnyButSelf",
    "killmsg": "~Target~ was stabbed by the Hunter, ~Self~! Surprise!",
    "recharge": 1001
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "zombie4",
    "translation": "Zombie",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "A soulless, wounded human ravaged by headcrabs, you share a /kill with your fellow zombies every night.",
    "info": "Can kill once per night. Sided with Xen.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 15,
    "msg": "You were killed by the Xen creatures!"
    }
    },
    "startup": {
    "revealRole": [
    "zombie4",
    "zombie5",
    "zombie6"
    ]
    },
    "initialCondition": {
    "poison": {
    "count": 4,
    "poisonDeadMessage": "Your wounds bled out and you died from poison!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "zombie5",
    "translation": "Zombie",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "A soulless, wounded human ravaged by headcrabs, you share a /kill with your fellow zombies every night.",
    "info": "Can kill once per night. Sided with Xen.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 15,
    "msg": "You were killed by the Xen creatures!"
    }
    },
    "startup": {
    "revealRole": [
    "zombie4",
    "zombie5",
    "zombie6"
    ]
    },
    "initialCondition": {
    "poison": {
    "count": 5,
    "poisonDeadMessage": "Your wounds bled out and you died from poison!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "zombie6",
    "translation": "Zombie",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "A soulless, wounded human ravaged by headcrabs, you share a /kill with your fellow zombies every night.",
    "info": "Can kill once per night. Sided with Xen.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 15,
    "msg": "You were killed by the Xen creatures!"
    }
    },
    "startup": {
    "revealRole": [
    "zombie4",
    "zombie5",
    "zombie6"
    ]
    },
    "initialCondition": {
    "poison": {
    "count": 6,
    "poisonDeadMessage": "Your wounds bled out and you died from poison!"
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "headcrab",
    "translation": "Headcrab",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "These ferocious little crustaceans have the ability to use /kill at night. Additionally, your venom allows you to /poison; your target will die in one day.",
    "info": "Can kill and poison every night. Knows zombies. Sided with Xen.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "kill": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Team",
    "priority": 10,
    "msg": "You were killed by the Xen creatures!"
    },
    "poison": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 20
    }
    }
    }
    },
    {
    "role": "antlion",
    "translation": "Antlion",
    "side": "mafia2",
    "help": "A hostile sand-dwelling Xen being, the pheromones you release allow you to /distract a player every night. You are able to sense vibrations in the ground, so you sometimes detect nightkills.",
    "info": "Can distract once per night. Sometimes haxes nightkills. Sided with Xen.",
    "actions": {
    "night": {
    "distract": {
    "target": "AnyButTeam",
    "common": "Role",
    "priority": 3,
    "distractmsg": "You were lured in by pheromones from an Antlion last night and couldn't perform your ~Action~.",
    "teammsg": "Enticing pheromones from an Antlion kept your partner busy last night. You spend the whole time getting him to snap out of it."
    }
    },
    "hax": {
    "kill": {
    "revealTeam": 0.12,
    "revealPlayer": 0.05
    }
    }
    }
    }
    ],
    "roles1": [
    "inspector",
    "hooker",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    {
    "zombie4": 0.3,
    "zombie5": 0.4,
    "zombie6": 0.3
    },
    "mafia1a",
    "villager",
    "antlion",
    "bodyguard",
    "villager"
    ],
    "roles2": [
    "samurai",
    "inspector",
    "bodyguard",
    "hooker",
    "spy",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "mafia1a",
    "headcrab",
    "antlion",
    "mayor",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "bomb",
    "villager"
    ],
    "roles3": [
    "samurai",
    "inspector",
    "bodyguard",
    "hooker",
    "spy",
    "uriah",
    "mossman",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    "hunter",
    "mafia1b",
    {
    "zombie4": 0.3,
    "zombie5": 0.4,
    "zombie6": 0.3
    },
    "headcrab",
    "antlion",
    "villager",
    "villager",
    {
    "zombie4": 0.3,
    "zombie5": 0.4,
    "zombie6": 0.3
    },
    "mafia1a",
    "villager",
    "mayor",
    "villager",
    {
    "zombie4": 0.3,
    "zombie5": 0.4,
    "zombie6": 0.3
    },
    "gman",
    "bomb",
    "villager",
    "villager"
    ],
    "killmsg": "±Combine: ~Player~ (~Role~) was killed!",
    "killusermsg": "***You died!",
    "lynchmsg": "±Combine: ~Player~ (~Role~)was gunned down!",
    "minplayers": 6,
    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "samurai",
    "hooker",
    "hooker2",
    "bodyguard",
    "gman"
    ]
    }[/HIDE]

    Roles:
    Combine:
    • Breen (+1000 votes)
    • Civil Protection (Shared kill, role reveal)
    • Hunter (Stalker, two daykills, one reveals)
    • Manhack (Bombs daykills, poisons night targeters)
    • Overwatch (Kill, ignores distracters, knows role and CP)
    Rebels (village):
    • Alyx (Hooker, gains kill on death of Eli)
    • Barney (Spy, reveals as Civil Protection)
    • Civilian (50% convert to Rebel)
    • D0g (Bodyguard, one-time kill)
    • Eli (Exposes daykillers, converts Alyx on death)
    • G-Man (Can inspect, distract and protect once each)
    • Gordon (Samurai, doesn't reveal)
    • Kleiner (Inspector)
    • Mossman (Reveals as Breen, -2 vote)
    • Rebel (Connector - hax on PRs)
    • Uriah (Safeguarder)
    Xen:
    • Antlion (Can distract once per night. Hax on kill)
    • Headcrab (Can kill and poison once per night)
    • Zombie (Can kill once per night. Dies in 4, 5 or 6 days)
    [/HIDE]

    Priority:
    [1] Civilian (Rebel)
    [1] G-Man (Distract)
    [2] Alyx (Distract)
    [2] Alyx (Distract)
    [3] Antlion (Distract)
    [4] G-Man (Protect)
    [5] D0g (Protect)
    [5] Uriah (Safeguard)
    [6] Alyx (Kill)
    [10] Overwatch (Kill)
    [10] Headcrab (Kill)
    [10] D0g (Smash)
    [15] Zombie (Kill)
    [15] Zombie (Kill)
    [15] Civil Protection (Kill)
    [15] Zombie (Kill)
    [16] G-Man (Inspect)
    [20] Headcrab (Poison)
    [25] Hunter (Stalk)
    [30] Kleiner (Inspect)[/HIDE]

    Spawn List:
    List 1 (6~10 players):
    Kleiner (inspector)
    Alyx (hooker)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Zombie (zombie4) [30.00%], Zombie (zombie5) [40.00%] or Zombie (zombie6) [30.00%]
    Civil Protection (mafia1a)
    Civilian (villager)
    Antlion (antlion)
    D0g (bodyguard)
    Civilian (villager)

    List 2 (11~15 players):
    Gordon (samurai)
    Kleiner (inspector)
    D0g (bodyguard)
    Alyx (hooker)
    Barney (spy)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civil Protection (mafia1a)
    Headcrab (headcrab)
    Antlion (antlion)
    Breen (mayor)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Manhack (bomb)
    Civilian (villager)

    List 3 (16~24 players):
    Gordon (samurai)
    Kleiner (inspector)
    D0g (bodyguard)
    Alyx (hooker)
    Barney (spy)
    Uriah (uriah)
    Mossman (mossman)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Hunter (hunter)
    Overwatch (mafia1b)
    Zombie (zombie4) [30.00%], Zombie (zombie5) [40.00%] or Zombie (zombie6) [30.00%]
    Headcrab (headcrab)
    Antlion (antlion)
    Civilian (villager)
    Civilian (villager)
    Zombie (zombie4) [30.00%], Zombie (zombie5) [40.00%] or Zombie (zombie6) [30.00%]
    Civil Protection (mafia1a)
    Civilian (villager)
    Breen (mayor)
    Civilian (villager)
    Zombie (zombie4) [30.00%], Zombie (zombie5) [40.00%] or Zombie (zombie6) [30.00%][/HIDE]

    review away =]
     
    Last edited: Mar 14, 2013
  2. Katia

    Katia Haxy Haxy!

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    Sided with himself, but wins with anybody as long as Gordon stays alive.",

    This makes no sense because of the village can't lose roles. Because of this he CAN'T win with any of the other teams because gordon would have to die and once he dies he isn't sided with anyone.

    "villageCantLoseRoles": [
    "samurai",
    "hooker",
    "hooker2",
    "bodyguard",
    "gman"
     
  3. citro

    citro CRYING LIGHTNING

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    haha fair enough, it's really tricky to incorporate G-Man's kinda weird role in the game with just a mafia script. I'll change the helptext then.

    edit: fixed, I hadn't even coded in his winningsides fsr!
     
  4. Fuzzysqurl

    Fuzzysqurl baa baa mareep I do what I want Server Owner Developer I do what I want Server Owner Developer

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    Two things I noticed in my brief skim:
    D0g should be told he can only use /smash OR /protect during the night. The help implies being able to use both in the same night.

    Headcrab's poison is instant-kill, but the help states the target will die in 1 day

    I'm trying to pay attention during class (haha, what a joke... oh wait im being serious, let me laugh even harder) so I couldn't get everything, it looks decent even though, Test [1]
     
  5. citro

    citro CRYING LIGHTNING

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    Fixed and fixed. :)
     
  6. Not L

    Not L Fairy Princess

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    1. Atlion and Manhack might should get +votes or a voteshield so they can win alone
    2. Civilian's "info" says 25% chance to convert, but it's actually 50%
    3. "You're Gordan Freeman the the leader of the rebellion"

    That's as far as I got. I'll get back to this when I have a bit more time. I'll probably end up suggesting a test for this.
     
  7. two sides of one coin

    two sides of one coin sick of all her shit

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    Yo, did a quick grammar check. Skimming through, noticed two things. Bold is what it should be, italics is what it is atm (not counting what Not L has, which should also be fixed.)

    "help": "The dictator that has negotiated with the Combine forces and handed over Earth, you now have control over the civil protection and overwatch. You can lynch anyone with one vote! Use this ability to get rid of Gordon Freeman once and for all, the one threat in your plans.",
    the one threat to your plans[/HIDE]

    "help": "These ferocious little crustaceans have the ability to use /kill at night. Additionally, your venom allows you to /poison; your target will die in one day.",
    Not a grammar error per se, but it should really be "You little crustaceans", as you shouldn't switch from third-person to first-person.[/HIDE]
     
  8. citro

    citro CRYING LIGHTNING

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    that should all be fixed
     
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    I think this theme might have some potential. Not sure how it'll be accepted by the masses, so I propose a Test [2]
     
  10. Not L

    Not L Fairy Princess

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    Test [3]

    I'd like to see how it plays
     
  11. N the Great

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    Hello Citro, this theme I didn't understand that guy with +1000 votes, when i look'd at it... I was stunned, but the theme is awesome, is it test'd?
     
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    Someone post logs. I can't join the server for a while. V_V
     
  13. citro

    citro CRYING LIGHTNING

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    okay I appreciate this thread has kind of died and there's some inherent balance issues with the theme which I really need to fix. I am going to work on this again at some point but I can't really right now, I'll get back to it soon hopefully.

    requesting lock!
     
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