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Help me with my XY OU team please.

Discussion in 'Rate My Team' started by NoobNumber1, Jul 10, 2014.

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  1. NoobNumber1

    NoobNumber1 New Member

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    Trevenant (F) @ Sitrus Berry
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Harvest
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 SDef / 4 Spd
    Impish Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Leech Seed
    - Protect
    - Substitute
    - Will o'Wisp

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    Trevenant will be used as a staller. I chose the EV set because the Hp helps with the stalling and the SpDef helps with defending.

    Weavile (M) @ Focus Sash
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Pressure
    EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Low Kick
    - Ice Shard
    - Ice Punch
    - Swords Dance

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    Weavile will be used as a hit or quit sweeper. I gave him focus sash to help him survive while he uses swords dance. The EV set is to ensure that he will hit hard and fast.


    Conkeldurr (F) @ Assault Vest
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Drain Punch
    - Mach Punch
    - Knock Off
    - Ice Punch

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    Conkeldurr is a bulky sweeper. He will be used to tank most things and hit them back twice as hard. Drain punch will be used for recovery while mach punch will be used to get the last hit where it is needed.

    Volcarona (M) @ Leftovers
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Flame Body
    EVs: 4 Def / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Bug Buzz
    - Flamethrower
    - Hidden Power
    - Quiver Dance

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    Volcarona will be a special sweeper. It will buff using Quiver Dance. HP ground is for other threats. Flamethrower and bug buzz will take down most foes that face Volcarona. I boosted spd and spatk to help get the last hit.

    Ferrothorn (F) @ Rocky Helmet
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Iron Barbs
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
    Impish Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Power Whip
    - Protect
    - Gyro Ball
    - Stealth Rock

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    Ferrothorn will be used to set hazards. He can also help as an offensive pokemon because of power whip and gyro ball. I chose a Impish nature to help power up gyro ball and since Ferrothorn is naturally slow it wont affect him at all.

    Togekiss (M) @ King's Rock
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Serene Grace
    EVs: 252 HP / 128 SAtk / 128 SDef
    Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
    - Air Slash
    - Defog
    - Roost
    - Thunder Wave

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    Togekiss will be used to slowly whittle down the opponents team by paralyzing them using thunder wave and then making them flinch constantly using air slash. I chose to maximize on spdef to help prevent quick kills from special sweepers.

    Trevenant (F) @ Sitrus Berry
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Harvest
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 SDef / 4 Spd
    Impish Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Leech Seed
    - Protect
    - Substitute
    - Will o'Wisp

    Weavile (M) @ Focus Sash
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Pressure
    EVs: 252 Atk / 4 Def / 252 Spd
    Jolly Nature (+Spd, -SAtk)
    - Low Kick
    - Ice Shard
    - Ice Punch
    - Swords Dance

    Conkeldurr (F) @ Assault Vest
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Guts
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Atk / 4 SDef
    Adamant Nature (+Atk, -SAtk)
    - Drain Punch
    - Mach Punch
    - Knock Off
    - Ice Punch

    Volcarona (M) @ Leftovers
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Flame Body
    EVs: 4 Def / 252 SAtk / 252 Spd
    Modest Nature (+SAtk, -Atk)
    - Bug Buzz
    - Flamethrower
    - Hidden Power
    - Quiver Dance

    Ferrothorn (F) @ Rocky Helmet
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Iron Barbs
    EVs: 252 HP / 252 Def / 4 SDef
    Impish Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Knock Off
    - Protect
    - Power Whip
    - Stealth Rock

    Togekiss (M) @ King's Rock
    Shiny: Yes
    Trait: Serene Grace
    EVs: 252 HP / 128 SAtk / 128 SDef
    Calm Nature (+SDef, -Atk)
    - Air Slash
    - Nasty Plot
    - Roost
    - Thunder Wave
     
    Last edited: Jul 10, 2014
  2. Yagura

    Yagura

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    Hello, you need to put more effort on the descriptions, 2 lines is less than the amount of lines that thereshould be. I suggest to read the rules and augment the descriptions or a mod will lock the thread.
     
  3. Fixed

    Fixed Active Member

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    You should get your importable by pressing Ctrl+E in the teambuilder, the current one has mistakes. The correct spelling is Will-o-wisp and the nature for Ferrothorn is Relaxed, not Impish. I can't really rate the team in depth because I'm not an OU player, but you're extremely weak to Fire types like Charizard.
     
  4. EvilDingoRobot

    EvilDingoRobot HELLOOOOOOOO

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    PO Trainer Name:
    Duck Hunt
    Ok, first of all, what happens if your trevenant gets taunted? Horn Leech should replace the substitute to take out many threats to your team, such as weather starters like Hippowdon and Tyranitar (Even though you shouldn't be fighting t-tar with Trevenant) or Keldeo.

    Trevenant (M) @ Sitrus Berry
    Trait: Harvest
    EVs: 4 HP / 252 Def / 252 Spd
    Impish Nature (+Def, -Spd)
    - Will-O-Wisp
    - Leech Seed
    - Protect
    - Horn Leech

    Agreeing with Fixed and Yaggy, the way you presented your team on this thread is incorrect. You should fix it before someone locks the thread.
     
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